The idea behind my video was constantly missed which would suggest that it wasn’t projected properly. However there was one response that seemed to suit the video more than mine, this was that my video was based on the monotony of life, and was also commented that it would be suitable to be shown within an art gallery.
To improve my video I think that I should have made the person who was walking in my video to appear to get a lot more tired as he keeps walking to suggest that he isn’t even going back in time. He is in fact supposed to be transported back every time so that he has to keep on trying. And with his perseverance achieves his goal, which was the intended interpretation.
One comment that was constantly appearing in the feedback questionnaires was that it was boring. One way I could have changed this is to make this slightly more intriguing, possibly by making the man run up the stairs to start with and then towards the end have the man climbing up the stairs on his hands and knees to show how much of a challenge this really is.
All in all, I still think that the video was a success even though there were some inconvenient responses to it. I still believe that the video turned out well. And people still can relate to it even though it may be a different relation than the one intended.